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lukezz9514
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19 Apr 2011, 10:08
Hi everyone,
Any of you can write in english very well, with terrific vocabulary and a lot of time to do it? If you do, can you help me write something.. it's actually a story about me, and I was thinking that hopefully someone would write it for me, but of course I'm going to tell you the story first. It's also a real story.
So, if you're willing, then thank you. It's greatly appreciated :')
klc123
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19 Apr 2011, 10:48
Someone hasn't done their Half-term homework
lukezz9514
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19 Apr 2011, 11:55
No, it's not like that. I just want to make a story about me but realizing that I don't have good vocabulary to make the story sad but interesting. :'(
p793
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19 Apr 2011, 12:20
Write the story up to best of your ability, and people on the forum will change bits and pieces and leave them as comments?
Wanderer
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19 Apr 2011, 13:45
Ill giv ya a head start:
Once upon a time...
Icy
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19 Apr 2011, 15:54
Once upon a time...
...there was a magnificent EF user by the name of lukezz9514.
"Somewhere along the line, we seem to have confused comfort with happiness"
collin
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19 Apr 2011, 19:00
who had a very hot mom.....
panchester07
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19 Apr 2011, 19:22
collin wrote: who had a very hot mom.....
and don't even get me started with his sister ....
to know Him is to want to know Him more"
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Tocar y moverse y tratarla siempre muy muy bien..'
Rome_Leader
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19 Apr 2011, 22:16
He would lay in the field sometimes, late at night, dreaming of what might be...
eddy192837
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19 Apr 2011, 22:20
a soccer ball, which gave him a wet dream...
p793
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19 Apr 2011, 23:17
...The next day,
desire10
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19 Apr 2011, 23:23
.. Lukezz looked over to his hot sister ..
Everything you need, is already inside.
mint
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19 Apr 2011, 23:30
Guys lets not take the piss hey? hes asking us for assistance, PM me what u want it to be about man and ill do my best for you.
i was made to ignite
desire10
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19 Apr 2011, 23:45
mint wrote: Guys lets not take the piss hey? hes asking us for assistance, PM me what u want it to be about man and ill do my best for you.
Aww you wrecked it
Haha sorry Mint! Luke post us what you can on this thread if you want,and we'll revise it for you.
Everything you need, is already inside.
Rome_Leader
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20 Apr 2011, 00:22
Combo breaker!
But yes, haha, in all seriousness, I would be happy to help you as well, but I really don't think it will be as terrible as you make it out if you try yourself, even if it is in somewhat broken English. It will sound more 'you'. No one else can really tell your life's story quite like you can.