Well that's kinda harsh playa, but i was not very satisfied with it either.
Personally, I don't like it when there is too much of just simple juggling when you are making a freestyle
video, and when the ball hits the ground or other things (a wall).
I wouldnt put in the parts where you mess up, but that is up to you.
I think that you need to practice more to make your tricks flow into one another because right now its too choppy.
Now about you saying that its your first time after spraining your ankle...why would you put that in?
If you're saying that your not 100 percent, then dont make the video until you are man, or else your going to get negative feedback.
Pretty disappointing...I was expecting more from all of the talking before.