you need some music and better editing in the video man, that was boring to watch!
and get a better camera.
now for the technical part of it...
good upperbody moves but stay away from that shirt trick. it's easy, takes too long to do, everyone can do it, and it's not impressive. but your stalling moves were good.
and try not to do it in ur house. makes it look a bit too amateurish and plus ur stalls come so much easier barefooted and bare chested (because of ur upperbody moves).
and try to get some lower body moves in there. do an atw, try to make some combos. and try some diff head stall tricks. watch abbas farid and you'll know what i'm talking about.
hey man, that was some cool stuff... but only a small portion i found very original. you look pretty young so keep it up and you'll probably get really good!
i agree with that one guy when he said the shirt trick should be taken out... me and my friends can all do that and we don't even freestyle...
I'm not much of a freestyler, but to me those were some cool moves. I liked the way you put the shirt on while doing the neck stall, that was my favorite part. Keep working on your moves and youll be great
I must say, I don't really like the trick with the t-shirt, it takes to long. Maybe a hint is when you do that trick, you have to make that part of the clip go faster ...