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expert
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Posted: Feb 19, 7:10 pm
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What do you think about Stephen Miranda's video?
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Sputnik
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Posted: Feb 20, 5:29 pm
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okay, i diddnt like your style at all. the music got a bit on my nerves too. but on the plus side you pulled off a load of tatws and a couple of katws, though im surprised you did as your style and juggling is sloppy  but the basics are there, just perfect what you got dude, good luck.
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lefty07
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Posted: Feb 20, 5:58 pm
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thx a lot sputnik-- i needed some feedback
but yea i was pretty bad when i made this video. i had only been freestyling for about a month or something, and i kinda rushed to make it b/c i finally had some free time. but i appreciate the comments and my next video probably will be a lot better.
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lefty07
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Posted: Feb 20, 5:59 pm
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my bad i forgot to mention that im stephen miranda lol
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Sputnik
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Posted: Feb 20, 6:12 pm
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ah okay man  your style seemed sloppy to me but thats easily eradictad. depending on how much youve improved since then, id try some basic combos. plus i forgot to mention the best bit of your vid was the piledriver-atw, looked sweet also dont put everything in slowmo/replay
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Tierney
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Posted: Feb 20, 11:46 pm
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Well you cant expect much from a first video really, mine was crap, but i took the feedback well and now i love freestyling better than ever !
Practise the basics more, then try develop some basic combo's Steve.
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Shenker
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Posted: Feb 21, 12:00 am
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he actually did not do a tatw..but he is close and will have it soon...sloppy but keep practicin.. 
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lefty07
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Posted: Feb 23, 8:02 pm
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no more comments??
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Sputnik
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Posted: Feb 23, 9:11 pm
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lol.
there will be, be patient. just keep drawing attention back to this thread n eventually ppl will bother to review it to shut you up 
however vids are getting less reviews nowadays if they arent nothing special. personally not a dig at expert, but i think its due to the ever growing amount of freestyle vids added each time.
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Ivan
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Posted: Feb 24, 12:53 am
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it was pretty good man! Dont stop jus keep practising onl thing i didnt like was ur style..really sloppy work on ur control a bit more other then that jsu keep practising.
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lil italy
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Posted: Mar 02, 8:46 am
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decent vid man, dont replay everything, just keep practicing
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Owen4ever
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Posted: Mar 04, 8:43 pm
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i'd kill myself if my last name was miranda.
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lil italy
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Posted: Mar 05, 4:12 am
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lol y????
my last name is gattone and noone can say it properly, but miranda is probably better than gattone. try getting stuck with ma friends name veljanovsipolous.
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angelo10
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Posted: Mar 14, 1:22 pm
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the video was pretty good i liked some parts, where about are you from in NY, because i live in NY myself not the city but Rome ny.
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lefty07
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Posted: Mar 14, 10:40 pm
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thx angelo
i live on long island--great neck to be exact
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